五年級(jí)英語作文及點(diǎn)評：My Favourite Food

 　　My Favourite Food

　　Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.

　　How about you? What’s your favourite food?

　　【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評】

　　My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是簡單地列舉出自己 喜歡的每一種食物，而是有詳有略地進(jìn)行介紹。整篇文章用詞準(zhǔn)確、語言流暢、沒有語法錯(cuò)誤。另外，文章中出現(xiàn)了一些生詞，可見小作者是用心查字典了。