五年級英語作文范文三篇

　　Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.

 

　　【要領(lǐng)點評】這篇作文的題目是“我的英語老師”，是一篇介紹人物的作文。小作者開門見山，直接點題，首先介紹了英語老師的姓名，然后逐一介紹了她的外貌特征、喜好、英語水平、上課特點以及師生情感等。  小朋友們在寫作文時，要注意使用自己 熟悉的詞[組]，以免寫出一些錯句子。寫作時要注意意思連貫、語句通順、標點正確、書寫清晰、規(guī)范等。

 

 

 

2.My Days of the week

 

　　I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.

 

　　【要領(lǐng)點評】這篇作文的題目是“我的一周”，小作者沒有說一些空話，而是從自己的親身經(jīng)歷寫起，敘述了自己一周七天的所作所為，并特別強調(diào)了星期天的喜好，寫得自然、流暢。 小朋友們寫作文時要注意人稱及謂語動詞的變化，要依據(jù)提示，結(jié)合自己的實際，寫自己身邊熟悉的事情。

 

 

 

3.My Favourite Food

 

　　Do you know what this is?  Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much. How about you? What’s your favourite food?

 

　　【要領(lǐng)點評】My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是簡單地列舉出自己 喜歡的每一種食物，而是有詳有略地進行介紹。整篇文章用詞準確、語言流暢、沒有語法錯誤。另外，文章中出現(xiàn)了一些生詞，可見小作者是用心查字典了。

 

 

 

 

五年級英語作文范文三篇