六年級英語作文及點評：A Post Card from John

 　　A Post Card from John

　　Dear Sarah,

　　This post card shows you a picture from my holiday. We got Kunming on Wednesday. On the first day we visited Stone Forest. It’s very beautiful. I love it very much. On Thursday Kathy and I got lost in the city. We asked a policeman for help. He helped us find the hotel. On Friday we went to a small village. We saw folk dances and ate some fresh vegetables from the farm. We enjoyed ourselves. Last day we went shopping ane bought some presents for friends. Tomorrow we will be back home.

　　John

　 【要領(lǐng)點評】

　　寫法：這是一封明信片，按照時間順序記敘了約翰假期去昆明度假這幾天的活動。分別記敘了游覽石林，迷路，看民族舞，購物，買禮物等活動。

　　時態(tài)：這篇文章由于是記敘已經(jīng)發(fā)過的事，所以大部分可以采用一般過去時來寫。

　　句型：主語+動詞過去式+其他。

　　注意：描述已經(jīng)發(fā)生過的事要用一般過去時，在寫這篇文章的時候要注意動詞的過去式的變化，尤其是動詞過去式的不規(guī)則變化。沒發(fā)生過的事要用一般將來時。