六年級英語作文及點評：Zoom’s Weekend

 　　Zoom’s Weekend

　　Zoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, he washed his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired.

　　【要領點評】

　　寫法：這篇習作是按時間順序記敘了Zoom的周末活動。

　　時態(tài)：這篇文章可以用三種時態(tài)來寫，由于本單元主要講的是一般過去時態(tài)，所以我們采用一般過去時態(tài)比較合適。

　　句型：主語+動詞過去式+過去時間。

　　注意：活動的相關表達法采用新舊知識結合的方法，但要注意動詞過去式的拼寫。